Peer Review Feedback

My classmates’ feedback helped me to improve my research paper. One of them made me to understand that I need to use more transitions and that some paragraphs have two topics instead of one. For this reason, I made the decision to separate the paragraphs in two and focus my analysis on one topic. Also, I discovered that my paper did not have a conclusion that the readers can answer the “so what?” question. Based on the feedback, I am really sure that my paper would be fine making these changes.